Once upon a time, there was a lion named Lilly. He had five friends, Panda, Monkey, Tiger, Leopard and Giraffe.
One time, Giraffe had a stick. He made a party flag with the stick. He had a piece of paper and he began to draw: "Party Here at Giraffe's House! Be sure you come! Seven o'clock!"
His friends came for the party, and they brought lots of decorations. Panda came to the party, and he was in charge. New animals came to the party that they'd never seen before.
Then hunters came, with swords, and they tore the party up. The animals chased the hunters away and said, "Don't come back here any more."
The animals locked the gates, then they made the party all fancy again.
The end.
One time, Giraffe had a stick. He made a party flag with the stick. He had a piece of paper and he began to draw: "Party Here at Giraffe's House! Be sure you come! Seven o'clock!"
His friends came for the party, and they brought lots of decorations. Panda came to the party, and he was in charge. New animals came to the party that they'd never seen before.
Then hunters came, with swords, and they tore the party up. The animals chased the hunters away and said, "Don't come back here any more."
The animals locked the gates, then they made the party all fancy again.
The end.
4 comments:
Now, there's a mythic parable on the rise and fall of human civilization for you!
Great story, Liam. I love it!
Liam, that was a great story! I would love to hear more. What did they have to eat at the party?
Keep up the good work.
Love,
Auntie H, Uncle Ed and Baby Grace
Liam,
That was such an awesome story. I hope that you are having tons of fun in Kindergarten!! I can't wait to read more of your stories.
Love,
Auntie Brooke
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